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bichonsmom
08-14-2001, 09:22 PM
Hi
My niece emailed this to me today & I thought how very appropriate for this web site. I hope that you enjoy it as well!

Pink Rose (a.k.a. "The Daddy's Day Poem")

Her hair up in a pony tail,
her favorite dress tied with a bow.
Today was Daddy's Day at school,
and she couldn't wait to go.


But her mommy tried to tell her,
that she probably should stay home.
Why the kids might not understand,
if she went to school alone.

But she was not afraid; she knew just what to say.
What to tell her classmates,
on this Daddy's Day.

But still her mother worried,
for her to face this day alone.
And that was why once again,
she tried to keep her daughter home.

But the little girl went to school,
eager to tell them all.
About a dad she never sees,
a dad who never calls.

There were daddies along the wall in back,
for everyone to meet.
Children squirming impatiently,
anxious in their seats.

One by one the teacher called,
a student from the class.
To introduce their daddy,
as seconds slowly passed.

At last the teacher called her name,
every child turned to stare.
Each of them were searching,
for a man who wasn't there.

"Where's her daddy at?"
she heard a boy call out.
"She probably doesn't have one,"
another student dared to shout.

And from somewhere near the back,
she heard a daddy say,
"Looks like another deadbeat dad,
too busy to waste his day."

The words did not offend her,
as she smiled at her friends.
And looked back at her teacher,
who told her to begin.

And with hands behind her back,
slowly she began to speak.
And out from the mouth of a child,
came words incredibly unique.

"My Daddy couldn't be here,
because he lives so far away.
But I know he wishes he could,
be with me on this day.

And though you cannot meet him,
I wanted you to know.
All about my daddy,
and how much he loves me so.

He loved to tell me stories,
he taught me to ride my bike.
He surprised me with pink roses,
and taught me to fly a kite.

We used to share fudge sundaes,
and ice cream in a cone.
And though you cannot see him,
I'm not standing all alone.

'Cause my daddy's always with me,
even though we are apart
I know because he told me,
he'll forever be here in my heart"

With that her little hand reached up,
and lay across her chest.
Feeling her own heartbeat,
beneath her favorite dress.

And from somewhere in the crowd of dads,
her mother stood in tears.
Proudly watching her daughter,
who was wise beyond her years.

For she stood up for the love,
of a man not in her life.
Doing what was best for her,
doing what was right.

And when she dropped her hand back down,
staring straight into the crowd.
She finished with a voice so soft,
but its message clear and loud.

"I love my daddy very much,
he's my shining star.
And if he could he'd be here,
but heaven's just too far.

But sometimes when I close my eyes,
it's like he never went away."
And then she closed her eyes,
and saw him there that day.

And to her mother's amazement,
she witnessed with surprise.
A room full of daddies and children,
all starting to close their eyes.

Who knows what they saw before them,
who knows what they felt inside.
Perhaps for merely a second,
they saw him at her side.

"I know you're with me Daddy,"
to the silence she called out.
And what happened next made believers,
of those once filled with doubt.

Not one in that room could explain it,
for each of their eyes had been closed.
But there placed on her desktop,
was a beautiful fragrant pink rose.

And a child was blessed, if only a moment,
by the love of her shining bright star.
And given the gift of believing,
that heaven is never too far.
[Edited by Don]
- Used with permission -
Cheryl Costello-Forshey
(c)2000

Don
08-21-2001, 04:29 PM
I thought someone had posted this here. I was just looking for it under the wrong title. Great poem! And I was able to find the author!
Thanks for posting it bichonsmom!

PsyQuestor
08-21-2001, 09:51 PM
A special thank you to Bichonsmom and Cheryl Costello-Forshey for bringing this poem to our forum.


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Tammy

shebrantley
08-23-2001, 07:58 AM
I have to make a fresh cup of cofee, a tear fell in this one... Thank you so much for sharing this poem with us...

PsyQuestor
08-23-2001, 11:01 AM
Originally posted by shebrantley
I have to make a fresh cup of cofee, a tear fell in this one... Thank you so much for sharing this poem with us...


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Passing the kleenex around!

I tore through nearly a half a box of them the first time i read this poem.
Four the first time...two the second...

JBannister
08-23-2001, 12:07 PM
Having been that little girl whose Daddy passed when she was
little, add my name to the "tear in the coffee" group.
Julie

Jude
08-24-2001, 12:10 AM
Thank you so much, Bichonsmom, for posting that beautiful poem!

" I know because he told me,
he'll forever be here in my heart"

That line has a really special meaning for me, and couldn't be more timely. Perhaps I'll post something about that when I can see through the tears well enough to type!

LeighAEA
09-02-2001, 07:22 PM
Originally posted by JBannister
Having been that little girl whose Daddy passed when she was
little, add my name to the "tear in the coffee" group.
Julie

Eighteen might not qualify as "little" but it certainly felt that way. And though I have read this poem many times, it still makes me cry. But crying is good, right? :)

I posted this poem a while ago in my online diary, but today, I see that I can change the "author unknown" now, and I thank you for that, bichonsmom!

Amanda
09-08-2001, 02:56 AM
That is so beautiful.

Thank you so much for sharing it.

I think I have a tear in both my coffee and my mtn dew.

It's 3 am...hooked can't leave yet.

Must read more....

Thanks again.

In love & light,
Amanda

Don
06-12-2002, 03:14 PM
Here's a good one to bump up in time for Father's Day.

Irishrose
06-12-2002, 06:27 PM
Thanks Don. This will be the third father's day that I can only give my Dad a cyber hug. But that is o.k. he never fails to accept it.

Irishrose

smyrnami
06-12-2002, 06:55 PM
Thanks so much, that was wonderful!

Kim